1011号托福作文题目

1011号托福作文题目

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2015年10月11日托福考试独立写作题目是：
Do you agree or disagree: It is a waste of time for government to fund space travel and space exploration.
参考范文：
Why does the government spend millions of dollars on space travel and space exploration? Many people wonder whether the government should also adopt austerity policies in this field in the spiral of economic downturn. Although the space travel may not bring any imminent benefit to the world, I believe the government should continue to support the mission without reservation. Not only can the space exploitation expand human knowledge to an unprecedented level, it has the potential to create real eternal economic prosperity.
First of all, investing in aerospace research may enable scientists to answer the ultimate question. Indeed, where do we come from? What are we? Where are we going? Anyone who dares to pay attention to the development of science would realize that physicists have been unable to make significant breakthroughs for decades. As a matter of fact, maybe we are never able to understand dark matter on our own. However, we should not exclude the possibility that there are other life forms that are intelligent enough knowing the answers of these challenging questions. If the government can fund the outer space research unremittingly, the odds of finding intelligent extraterrestrial life would be much higher. It is my sincere hope that our alien friends can enlighten us with the origin of universe.
More importantly, any visionary leader would realize the development of space exploration is the only way to resolve economic recession once and for all. In accordance with the classical Keynes’s school of economists, the lack of demand is the fundamental cause of business cycle. Can we expect the demand to be created by our Africa friends in future to save the global economy? Temporarily maybe. But in the long term, the trade across universe, mimicking the current international trade, is the only way to generate infinite demand. Imagine our brave men and women venturing into space travel, they can negotiate with members of the organization that is similar to the World Trade Organization on behalf of the Earth. The construction of universe highway alone, which would carry the goods from the Earth to alien planets, will create millions of jobs for centuries. It is worthwhile to mention that the delegation must bring lawyers with them as their role has always been crucial in trade talk and I would like to volunteer if no one has the courage.
In conclusion, I am thrilled by the prospect of space travel and travel exploration.

托福TPO第15的小作文，很反动啊

In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for four-fifths (80 percent) of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company benefits.
For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rate. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate.
Finally, the option of a four-day workweek would be better for individual employees. Employees who could afford a lower salary in exchange for more free time could improve the quality of their lives by spending the extra time with their families, pursuing private interests or enjoying leisure activities.

帮忙改一篇TOEFL作文

affect(derogatory sense)—>influence
people are easier to find a job——>it is easier for people to find a job,
he or she was graduated, "was" should be expunged
are->is they->he etc
a university student is more possible the same question with the aforementioned one
Businesses are not wanted ???make no sense
loyal to their cause what do you mean by saying "cause"
are accepted->accept->receive
overall, your argument is somehow too unconditional, which is not appreciated in the Toefl Writing. better to include some restrictions.
to be honest, you won't be able to earn a decent score with such an article.
advise: take some basic exercise such as reading some model essays before commencing on writing.

帮改托福TOEFL作文，50分悬赏，高手帮忙～

问题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to improve the education quality in a country is to increase teachers' salary.
作文：
Recently, people are paying more and more attention to the quality of education than ever before. (前后不连贯而且没有开篇点明主旨，建议改为：There has been a heat debate about how to improve the education quality in a country and different people have different perspectives.) Some educators have pointed out that the best way to improve the quality of a country's education is to increase its teachers' salary. In my opinion, (为了与后面的but呼应，应该先让步，后转折，更自然：I admit that) increasing their salary may be (说话留点余地，等下好反驳：more or less) an effective way to improve a country's condition of education, but I do not think that this can be （一般陈述用：is） the best choice for all of us. （这一句虽然我是明白你的意思，但是不够直接，与下文照应也不工整，建议改为：but it should not be the best solution to this problem since it fall to deficiency due to several negative effects.）
I have to say (语气更加直白：confess/admit) that increasing teachers' incomes does have several advantages (语义更加明确：for propelling advancement of education quality in a country as a whole) . First, it could (不放过任何一个细节词语，注意积累这些常用词：contributes to/is beneficial to/is propitious to/conduces to) make teachers more enthusiastic about teaching. Admittedly (感情更真挚：Unfortunately), in the modern world, most teachers do not consider their jobs as something attractive. They may have more hobbies out of teachers' office. And, with little salary, they may not devote themselves in teaching, and accordingly, their quality of education will not satisfy us. So, giving teachers higher pay can be a catalyst in our effort of (感觉很别扭，建议改为to the improvement of quality in education) improving the quality of education.
Another thing that improving the salary of teachers can benefit us is that, because earning a higher pay can not only improve a person's living condition, but also increase his or her social status, it will attract more talents to engage in teaching. With great intelligence, we have reason to believe that they will make our education condition better.
(这一段说的很不地道，建议改为：Another benefit of improving the salary of teachers is that a higher pay to teachers can not only serve to make a better living condition in the economic society, but also contribute to higher social statuses to them and hence they can get more respect from others. As teachers are getting more and more respected, it is undoubtedly that there will be increasing number of talent and distinguished teachers willing to devote themselves to teaching. )
However, we cannot say that increasing teachers' salary is the best way to improve the education quality of this country, for it does have some drawbacks. One is that increasing teachers' salary means students need to pay much more money for good education than ever before (, which sets up a more insurmountable barrier to the accessibility of education of the poor students). For example, nowadays, some of the areas in China is(are) still very poor and underdeveloped, (and) most of children there cannot even pay for primary education (the primary tuition)and have to drop out from schools. once the incomes(income) of teachers is increased, there may(must) be more and more children who will (去掉) lose the chance of education. That's one thing beyond our expectation. (不靠谱) And as I have mentioned above,(it has been mentioned above) increasing teachers' salaries may not be suitable for every country in this world.(in the global level) In some (Some) underdeveloped countries,(for instance,) increasing teachers' incomes will load the governments and its people with more pressure of money( add more economic pressure on both the governments and its people), and this shortcoming can outweigh any other advantages in such a country.
I believe that there is something more helpful than increasing teachers' salary to a country's condition of education, say, improving the laws of education may push teachers to be more professional and effective than before. All in all, I do not agree with the statement that increasing teachers' salaries is the best way for the improvement of a country's education quality.
(建议改为：
According to the discussion above, I admit that the perspective of increasing the salary of teachers in order to improve the education quality in a country is appealing in some ways, such as improving their living standard and making them more respectable, which ultimately conduce to a better teaching performance. However, we should recognize that there are also drawbacks of this policy including playing a heavier economic burden on both governments and families of children who have to pay higher tuition to school. Overall, increasing the teacher’s salary should not be the perfect way to improve the education quality. )
注：
1。下画线的地方是我认为需要完善的，括号内是我的建议。
2。你原文评分应该在20-22。因为虽然没有重大错误，但是句子有不少问题：句型过于简单，用词有些不当，句子有些不通顺。当然，在词汇方面，应该要求不大。还有就是论证没有说服力。比如“大部分老师都并不喜欢教学”这个前提我认为就有点站不住脚。
3。努力方向：
a.把作文模板好好完善练习。
b.多积累常用词组词汇以及常用句型，注意句型变化。
c.因为你原文有些地方的论证显得枯竭，所以建议练习论证展开能力。
d.最快速的提高方法是看看别人怎样写的。

托福作文题目

. Some people think that parents should plan their children's leisure time carefully. Other people believe? that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choice.
2. People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree? with the statement. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
3. People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or? something different Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give reasons for your choice.
4. Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think? that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to) support your position.
TOEFL（The Test of English as a Foreign Language，简称TOEFL），是由美国教育测验服务社（ETS）举办的英语能力考试，全名为“检定非英语为母语者的英语能力考试”，中文音译为“托福”。TOEFL有三种，分别是：纸考、机考和网考，新托福满分是120分。托福复习主要资料为托福机经（又称民间托福答案题库）。TOEFL考试的有效期为两年（从考试日期开始计算）；例如：2003年1月18日参加考试，这次考试成绩的有效期是从2003年1月18日到2005年1月18日。2014年4月5日，英国内政部与美国教育考试服务中心（ETS）合约到期后，不再续约，而英国大学也不将承认其机构下托福和托业的英语语言成绩。
TOEFL，Test of English as a Foreign Language，由美国教育测验服务社( ETS, Educational Testing Service)在全世界举办，是一种针对母语非英语的人进行的英语水平的考试。TOEFL是出国留学(美国、加拿大)的必备考试成绩，美国和加拿大已有超过2400所大学和学院承认这项考试成绩，规定了申请者的最低TOEFL录取分数线。TOEFL成绩与奖学金的成功率是相关的。
TOEFL
国外许多政府部门，私人或机构奖学金计划，执照证明机构等也是依据TOEFL成绩来评审接受人的英文程度。在中国，TOEFL亦是英语水平的一种证明，有一些单位(特别是三资企业)采用它衡量应聘者的英语水平。从一九九八年七月起，托福考试在许多国家从传统的纸笔方式转变成电脑方式。但亚洲一些国家，如中国大陆、台湾和香港澳门地区等仍采用原来传统的纸笔方式，暂时不作改变。预计2002年下半年实现计算机化考试。
纸笔考试是由正确答案的数量总和来决定成绩总分，而不管问题的难易。电脑考试则不同，它根据回答问题的质量来给出下一个问题，如果考生回答得正确，电脑将提高问题的难度；如果考生回答错误，电脑将降低问题难度。因此成绩是由正确答案的难度来决定得分，而不是由正确答案的数量。电脑考试的写作一项，考生可以选择打字或书写。电脑考试的费用：美国及其属地和加拿大为USD，所有其它国家为USD。

关于TOEFL 作文训练

其实写作是个只要花功夫就能出分的项目。
像我第一次考试什么都没写只考了27，第二次我还什么都没写只考了24，而身边的朋友们几乎都是满分- -！所以多多练习才是真理。每天花1.5hour练时间是非常充裕的，所以只要你坚持+刻苦一定没问题。
先说OG吧：众所周知OG里面给了一个所谓的"185官方题库"。本人非牛人，考过3次TOEFL,分别在07.10，08.8和 08.11。这三次independent writing都是good(4.0-5.0)。而integrated writing在最后一次是fair（3.5-4.0）。第一次的题目经我考后查证确实在185题库里（虽然事先也没看到吧），但是后两次的题目我怎么也找不到，是新题。所以对待OG的正确态度应该是把题库里面的问题分分类，比如：个人情感，生活态度，投资问题，习惯爱好等等（口语也适用）然后每个类练几篇，主要是训练你英文论证的思维和语言，以及句套的熟练程度。第二，OG上的例文一定要仔仔细细的看上几遍，看ETS那个BT机构到底喜欢什么样的洋八股，然后有的放矢。第三，你要关注一下OG上integrated writing部分，看看真题到底是什么思路，因为许多教材这里模仿的及其不像（尤其是longman).
再说一下Delta吧：我现在考完了没事拿这个当英文写作练习用书，（呵呵，什么事儿啊）觉得对写作技能有一定的提高，但是应试性不强。比如4.5的联系居然还让你口头复述文章内容(怎么成口语了都）。你有一个月的时间，不建议你用这个书。
我上的是东方的课，因此写作的书当然是笑来的那本范文集。一本好的范文集非常重要，没事就多看吧。但是我现在发现有比笑来更好的书——胡敏的那本。个人觉得笑来写得文章有时候会观点不清晰，而且观点也怪怪的。笑来提到的列提纲落实具体细节我一篇文章也没做，就是懒！现在真后悔了。
计划表你要自己列，因为我不了解你的写作程度如何以及你对写作的看法。毕竟因人而异的事情，大的方法和经验告诉你了。虽然本人非牛人，但还是希望以上的话对你有用。

跪求托福考试作文拿高分技巧，策略呀？帮帮忙呀~

就是首先应该内容简单化，不论是在练习时还是在考场上都应当牢记。因为许多人在作文上败下阵来就是因为花费了大量的时间和精力追求内容的新颖别致。还有就是结构模式化，通览以往的TOEFL作文考题，你会发现托福作文考题不仅题目弹性很小，而且题型相结稳定，所以你完全可以在考前针对考试中可能出现的题型按照固定的结构模式进行训练。然后就是语言要包装，要在语言的细节上下一些功夫，TOEFL作文的分数就会更上一层楼。最后考前要强化，任何事物都是要在实践中得到证明的，你一定要提起笔来写，只有拿起笔真正写过文章的人在考场上才有可能将种种策略运用开来，赢得高分，还有就是可以去新东方之类的上个课，听听老师讲讲方法技巧对提高也会很有帮助的。

toefl作文如何提高

提高toefl作文成绩需要对症下药，托福作文成绩的提高更需要平时多加训练，还建议要多看原版英语报刊文章，可以选择性地听听VOA的相关节目。习语英语行文在托福作文中只是起一个画龙点睛的作用，而不应大篇幅地使用。如果用的过多也会引起读者或考官的反感。而且习语的使用难度比较高，很容易使用错误，成为扣分的依据。因此，我们在应用英语习语时，不但要把习语用好，而且要用巧。

托福写作15分什么水平

托福写作15分差不多是初学的水平。

托福综合写作技巧

1、用词准确，逻辑清晰

托福作文对于语言的要求圆圆低于对文章内容和结构的要求，托福考试对考生提出的要求只是用完整的句子表达内容。并未对考生的语言专业能力设定过高的门槛，所以在这一点上考生要更注意用词的准确和逻辑清晰能力。

2、细分阅读布局，定位听力分段

在我们综合写作中这一技能也是十分必须的。不论是停顿时间还是表示顺序的连接词，或是代表语义转换的语气词等都是一个不错的判断分段的标志。可是毕竟因为只有一遍的听力机会，所以有些停顿甚至是连词都未必能完全听到，因为事先毫无征兆。考生不难发现每个段落都有一个关键词，考生要注意这些关键词的含义。

3、精听主体首句，否则静候关系连词

一般难度不高的综合写作听力内容会在对应段落如约出现与阅读对应的中心理由，而这个中心理由也就是写作的得分点。可是现在不少难度高的听力内容并不会直接在每段的首句就亮明教授的反驳理由，而是说了一个相关的内容，混淆视听，增加难度。

因为我们可以通过其他的方法来等待到我们需要的反驳理由。而此时连接词的重要性就不可小觑。

新托福写作考试的评分标准

综合写作：

1、 内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提取出来（通常情况下有三点），并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。

2、 文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的。

只要作文中的错误不至于使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。

独立写作：

1、 有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在展开讨论时所采用的论据，比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响了得分。

2、 逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。比如说某位同学的英文写作能力很强，我光说很强，很厉害，写得很好都很表面，但是我如果说这位同学托福写作考了29分，那么就是很细节很有说服力的论据了。

3、 内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。达到内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。

4、 遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。托福考试终究是语言考试，最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句，而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚，所以建议考生尽量多阅读和模仿英文原版材料，这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。