发布时间: 2024年11月26日 01:14
托福 作文 是托福考试中很关键的一个部分，也是我国考生的一大难点。想要拿到托福作文高分，有必要对托福作文题目有深化的研讨和理解，首要就是关于托福写作资料的了解。今日我就给大家介绍八个常考的托福写作论题观点，期望能够协助我们做好托福写作备考。
托福作文八个万能论点
托福作文全能观点一：健康(养分、放松心境、身体素质、食品安全、生活习惯、烟酒、身体损伤、安全、生命、产业)
托福作文全能观点二：便当(节省时刻，时刻灵活，交通，休闲，文娱，吃喝，购物)
托福作文全能观点三：沟通(沟通技巧，与家人，爸爸妈妈，朋友，同学，搭档，领导，网友沟通)
托福作文全能观点四：习惯与心思(风俗，习惯，爱好，亲情，友情，爱情，乐趣)
托福作文全能观点五：成就感“sense of achievement”(成功，荣誉感，财富，自傲，动力 “motivation”(正面)，压力 “pressure”(负面)，荣誉感“sense of honor”)
托福作文全能观点六：环保(生态平衡，动物植物的保护，环境污染---水，空气，光，噪声，辐射......生态平衡 “ecological balance”，新时期下的托福作文题目)
托福作文全能观点七：经济(薪酬，收入支出，资金“fund”，出资 “investment”，节省 “save”， 旅行 “tourism”，工作 “employment”，效益 “profit”，税收 “tax”)
托福作文全能观点八：品质(有经历，精干、聪明，协作，坚忍不拔，进步，独立，负责任，宽恕，达观，谦善，英勇，善良)
有经历：experienced...
精干：ability，capable，competent...
协作：cooperate，cooperative...
坚忍不拔：persevere，perseverance，persevering...
进步：aggressive...
独立：independent...
负责任：responsibility，responsible...
宽恕：tolerate，tolerant，tolerance...
达观：optimistic...
所谓万变不离其宗，托福写作资料和观点一直以这八项为主，同学们平常应当多了解这些方面的信息，把握最新的社会观点常识，在托福作文题目和内容创造时就可有料有据可倾。
托福写作万能论点使用
在托福考试时，首要是时刻紧。要在半小时内完结400字左右的 文章 ;其次，在很短时刻内要根据标题想出几条支撑自个观点的理由，并将其有序地组织起来，构成文章，而且还要做到言语地道。所以考生很简单手忙脚乱。所以为了避免这种状况的发生，让考生在短时刻内完结一篇高质量的文章，把握一些窍门是很必要的，用的时分切忌生搬硬套，要灵活运用。在有限的时刻内，在确立了咱们要写的基地观点以后，就要想出几个分观点，敏捷定位，迅速进入写作状况。
比方：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are putting too much emphasis on appearance and fashion. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
解这道标题，首要从自个动身，怎样好写，怎样简单写，去断定自个的基地观点。假如从disagree 的视点动身，要从哪几个分观点去论说大家并没有对表面和时髦putting too much emphasis 呢?考生在现场可能会抓耳挠腮，一时不知从何下手，这时咱们能够凭借10个分类去逐个验证。
首要，对时髦表面的重视能够协助咱们的Career preparation吗?重视表面，重视时髦反映一自个的日子品尝，自个气质会提高，进而导致大家的重视，这自然会为自个带来意想不到的作业时机，进而开展自个的作业。你能够举例，_ 即是因为往常对时髦的重视，重视表面，气质好，给人形象深入，而在 面试 中锋芒毕露，成功地得到一份好的作业。
接下来从其他十个分类中，进行迅速定位，寻找分观点。国家与文明，领域很大，能够打开论说。就其中的公益和慈悲方面，能够举例。因为大家以时髦的重视，还能协助他人，比方近来的“犀利哥事情”，从一个一般的漂泊乞丐，因为其异乎寻常的穿着打扮，导致大家的重视，进而协助他与家人团聚，唤起了大家对弱势群体的重视，进而促进了社会调和。
第三个“健康和安全”也能用，能够说大家对时髦表面的重视，自然会崇尚健康的护肤商品，保养品，要注意保持身材，就会重视健身，要穿用对大家身体好的布料做的衣服，进而提高了人的身体健康。
第四个，经济。大家重视表面和时髦，就会进行大量消费，能够用一组数据来证明，时髦业对经济的奉献。消费影响商场，进而推进经济开展。
第五个，幸福和情感。现代日子的压力越来越大，大家期望能够放松身心，对时髦和表面的重视，能够让大家的身心得到愉悦，减轻作业中的压力。大家仅仅凭借时髦来放松文娱自个，使自个的日子愈加精彩，并不是put too much emphasis。
托福作文中虚拟语气的使用
托福作文中虚拟语气:
我们在举例的时分常常会这么说“假如………”,”假定………..”,即if………
先不说这种举例的好还是坏,就本身的语句而言,许多都是有疑问的.
托福写作教导 总结 了一些if的用法,我们考前看看
先看两个托福作文例子:
[Scenery]Sue has lost her watch. She think it may be at Ann’s house.
SUE: I think I left my watch at your house. Have you seen it?
(1) ANN: no, but I’ll have a look when I get home. If I find it, I’ll tell you.
If I find…., I’ll……
(2) Ann says: If I found a wallet in the street, I’d take it to the police.
If I found……, I’d(=I would)……..(而不是if I find, I’ll…..)
这儿两个语句有着不一样的意思,前者表明Ann觉得她有找到手表的实在也许性.因而才说if I find….., I’ll…..
而后者是彻底不一样的状况.在这儿Ann没有思考实在的也许性;她在虚拟这一个托福 作文 情形,并不认为真的能够在街上拣到手表.所以才说:if I found……,I’d……
if I do……….和if I did………的差异
用if+曩昔式(if I found / if you were / if we didn’t等) 表明虚拟的工作,而不是指曩昔时刻发作的工作:
What would you do if you won a million pounds?
I don’t really want to go to their party, but I probably will go. They’d be offended if I didn’t go
Sarah has decided not to apply for the job. She isn’t really qualified for it, so she probably wouldn’t get it if she applied.
If从句中通常不必would:
I’d be very frightened if somebody pointed a gun at me.(而非if somebody would point)
If I didn’t go to their party, they’d be offended(而非if I wouldn’t go)
If …….would能够表明用来恳求或人做某事:
I would be grateful if you would send me your brochure as soon as possible.
“Shall I close the door?” “yes, please, If you would.”
Would(‘d) / wouldn’t用于语句的主句(不是if从句)
If you took more exercise, you’d (=you would) probably feel healthier.
Would you mind if I used your phone?
I’m not tired enough to go to bed yet. I wouldn’t sleep.
别的,if引导的条件句也能导致倒装,假如要是在作文里用到,也是一个加分点:
先看正常语序.
It would be a serious setback, if the talks were to fail.
If you should need more information, please telephone our main office.
If Alex had asked, I would have been able to help.
倒装是要省掉if
it would be a serious setback, were the talks to fail.
Should you need more information, please telephone our main office.
Had Alex asked, I would have been able to help
倒装句比if-从句愈加正式.
但是在否定句里边,不能够用缩写
e.g.
Had he not resigned, we should have been forced to sack him(不必hadn’t he…..)
再多说一下,在新托福写作中,期望我们举例的时分能够写实例,因为实例有它的特指性和唯一行,当然,假如实在你没有经历过,在举例虚拟一个场景的时分, if起头,就不要弄错了。
托福独立写作五段结构的让步式写 法
托福独立写作思绪剖析
在写一边倒的文章的时分，多数考生喜欢采用经典的五段式写法，即开头段、结尾段、中间三段三个分论点论证。这样的写法当然无可厚非，但是多数学生会碰到两个问题，一是我只能想到两个理由，第三个理由写不出来怎样办?二是我三个理由都写完了，但是字数不够300字怎样办?这样的状况，就需求我们的救命稻草"退让段"出场了。
什么是退让段写法?
退让段，望文生义，就是退了一步的段落。例如，For further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 选择了同意的立场，写完了三个同意的理由之后，能够再写一点退让段阐述一下反方的观念，即在学校学习好也很重要。写退让段的益处有很多，一是上文提及的最实践的用处---凑字数，二是从行文逻辑看，写一段退让段也能够展示考生思想的紧密性。只需时间允许，此种一举多得的做法为何不尝试呢?
托福独立写作退让段写法解说
但是，退让段写作也需求遵照一定的准绳。考生在写作时，应当依照三部曲停止：1)写出一个反方观念 2)停止一定水平的削弱 3)重申本人的观念。
1. 写出反方观念
这一步大多数同窗都做得不错，但是在提出反方观念之前，可再加上一些衔接词，例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。还拿之前拿到标题做例子，For further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 总观念是同意，退让段写学习好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方观念时，应写：Admittedly, acquiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for "study" is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.
2. 停止一定水平的削弱
这是大多数同窗会疏忽的一步。很多同窗在写退让段的时分，喜欢跳过第二步，直接重申本人的观念，但是这样的写法会显得逻辑上牵强，行文也显得僵硬。因而，在提出反方观念时要停止一定的削弱。例如在写完上文那句话之后，应加上：However, the outstanding scores only prove the intelligence of the student, while the EQ, largely reflected by how well you relate with others, plays an utmost significant role in the future career success.
3. 重申本人的观念
这一步十分重要，由于退让段的提出仅仅是小插曲，重要的还是本人的观念。切不可写了退让段，就忘了本人的立场，那样就是得失相当了。因而，在写完上面两句话之后，需求再加上一句，therefore, I still hold the opinion that relate well with others is more important than acquiring high scores in school.
在退让段的写作当中，特别需求留意两点：1是第二步的削弱过程，这样可使文章看起来不那么唐突，更为流利。2是另外还需留意字数的控制，退让段切不可写得超越之前的阐述段的长度，否则就有观念不明白的嫌疑了。
如何在小托福写作考试中得满分?我考过4次托福(纯粹 爱好，第一次分就够了) 作文 都是满分，SAT作文也是满分12分。下面给大家 说说 经验 !
如何在小托福写作考试中得满分
说在前面：因为我词汇、语法、句法实在是不行，所以走的写作路线是纯平民路线，没有任何SAT词汇，句法貌似只有定语从句，所以很简单……英语基础和我一样低等的人也很好上手。
我不是英语高手，我只是作文帝。
首先要搞明白的是，考试中的Essay永远不是抒情文、 记叙文 或者文学作品，而是 议论文，是表现一个学生逻辑思考、思想深度以及行文结构表达方式的载体，所以记住的是“重要的不是你的句法、词汇，而是你的思想、结构。”
几个注意点
1.不要用长句
三立在线作文最牛逼的北京的史愚老师亲口教导我的，长句有两个问题，一是中国学生水平不够，很难写出语法没有错误、意思表达准确的长句，语法错误、几个逗号连用、倒装从句混合是经常的。二是看essay的人也是人，经常是那种大学生研究生，没人愿意看长句混在一起的 文章，短剧更讨人喜欢，并且表达意思更加清晰，准确。
2.细节要注意
出现My brother, friend的时候加上名字，出现university的时候要给上名字，给出事例的时候要给出时间地点人物，没人愿意看“我的弟弟去了一个大学，然后再大学里交了很多朋友，后来去了公司里那些朋友成为了他的财富”，而“我的弟弟Dan去了Upenn读书，在学校里认识了Jeff、Dennis等好朋友，而他后来去Google公司工作的时候发现了他们成为了自己一生宝贵的财富”比上面那句好了很多。实在要写流水账也要写出细节和感觉。
3.瞎编要编的像
不解释
4.自己的事例难写，最好不要写
5.积累，积累，再积累
没有积累和自己独立的想法
下面就是926考的一题托福题，实在是想不出来考试时写的每句话，大概简短的还原一下当时写的东西，希望有所帮助
It is more important for government to pay attention to health care issues than environmental issues, do you agree or not?
(题目，环境保护和医疗改革哪个更重要)
"Water and air are the sources of people's lives, and the bases of the world." This was said by the ancient greek philosopher Thales.(开头引用是最简单的，泰勒斯相信水和空气是最重要的元素，相似的话说过，稍加改动就可以出一个quote)(谢谢45楼的朋友纠正，是Thales说的，不是Hume)Looking at the dirty air in the sky, smelling the gross smell from Yantze River, I can't agree with him any more.(这就是搞笑的= =) The environmental issues are always the most important to a country, especially the country I live in, China.(可以适当点出我提出这个论点的原因，毕竟不存在完全客观的文章，主观因素客观环境都要适当强调)
When the environment is becoming worse and worse, I have to say it is the most serious problem in this country. My junior high classmate , Anita, lived by the end of the Yangtze River. The industrial area is around there and all the factories pollute the water day by day. Unfortunately she got cancer, like many people who lived there.(真人真事，默哀一分钟) If the polluted environment wants to "kill" you, there is no doctor in this world can save us. Looking at her face in the funeral, I finally understood the importance of protecting environment.(真人真事要写出细节和感觉，否则很难不像流水账)
It is always early to improve the health care, but never the environment. My dad is the president of the city hospital, and he always tells me "If the government gives us enough money, this hospital can be the best one in this country very quick by hiring best doctors and buying newest equipment."(真人语言描写，用他人的口说你想说的话) But we all know that the environment is always harder to save. After second industrial revolution in Britain, thepollution in Thames River became horrible. When the British government realized that problem, it took them tens of years to solve it.(用实例证明) Just like my mom always told me, " It's easy to make something dirty, really hard to make it clean again."
It's kind of like the paradox, but many times, the environmental problems cause many health care issues.(一般考试都是二选一，有时候你会发现你选的那个其实可以导致或_没选的那个，也就是说这点要是点出来的话，就更证明你的论点的正确性了) Many datas do prove that, the people who live in a good environment have better quailities of lives. In 1970s, LBJ, the president of United States, passed a proposal which was called Clean Water Plan.(真事，积累) It was made to make the water clean in the US, and it did work. The most amazing thing is that the datas show the numbers of patients in hospital decreased rapidly during first 15 years.(瞎编，有一定的事实根据) That does prove my point, the environmental issue is a important factor of the health care issues.
As I said, we do realize the seriousness and importance of the environmental issues. We do need a "Heaven" with clean water and air, green trees and beautiful mountains. The "Hell" with doctors and hospitals is always our last choice.(结尾很重要，搞笑、正经、引用都可以)
就这样，希望大家都成为作文帝。
托福考试作文 范文 :技术创新改变世界
托福考试作文题目：
Directions:
The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question:
Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
托福考试作文参考分析：
要求考生通过定位，概括和分类仔细审题，就某个问题写一篇感想，或就一个事件进行阐述，解释以及论证自己的观点，列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
托福考试作文范文参考
Although internet came into being about 2 decades ago, it has changed the way we live much more than the last 200 years. Its influence on business, communication and information is so profound that people now simply can't live without it.
based on the development of internet, a lot of new types of business ranging from international conglomerate to regional small online shops are also established. The most famous internet based international conglomerate would be Google. Companies like this basically do not sell products but their service. This changed the traditional way of doing business which always involved some concrete products sell to people. Internet opens a cyber world in which a huge market is untapped. Besides large companies, internet also prospers small businesses. For example, local stores can do their business online. All they have to do is to create a website of their own and all customers need to do is to go to their websites and order what they want. Then they just need wait at home for the products they just purchased to be delivered. This way, we never need to worry about the traditional exhausting shopping.
Internet also fundamentally changed the way people communicate. There are a lot of chatting programs, such as MSN, YAHOO MESSENGER, SKYPE, that make it possible for people from different parts of the world to have a conversation with each other as long as everyone has access to internet. They even provide audio and video services meaning not only people can chat, but also they can hear and see each other. Besides that, what really makes them appealing is that they don't charge us for doing these things. These advantages definitely surpass the service that mobile phone provides us.
Internet is also like a huge tank that can contain almost infinite information. A search has shown that right now the information that internet can provide us exceeds any library in the world and some even argue that it has more information than all the libraries in total. I certainly wouldn't doubt that. I use internet to search for a lot of information. Whenever I have an project to finish, the first thing I do is to go to the internet to find relevant materials.
There is no doubt that internet has had a fundamental change on our everyday life. Though there are many problems that accompany with it, we can't deny that internet is one of the most innovations in human history.
托福考试作文范文:父母应代替少年 儿童 作决定吗
托福考试作文题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
托福考试作文参考分析：
表明立场：这样的做法有一定的道理。支持这样的做法的理由：older teenage children还不够成熟(immature)，考虑不够周全(inconsiderate)，尤其涉及到经济相关的决定时，缺乏独立承担能力(incapable of being independent)。然而，“如何保证parents或者adult relatives所作的决定就是正确的”也是个问题。另外，总是把孩子排除在决定权之外，是否会使孩子变得“没能力做出任何决定”?the ability to make sound decision是人生道路上很重要的能力之一。
托福考试作文范文参考：
The issue of whether parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their teenage children arouses much controversy among people with different perspectives and backgrounds. Some people believe the statement is legitimate, because children are not mature and have not enough experiences to determine the optimal choice. On the other hand, people claim that nobody can control other's life even their parents. People should be responsible for their own behaviors and determine their lives. As far as I am concerned, I would like to refute the former and support the latter. In the following discussing, I would like to address some evidence to substantiate my point of view.
In the first place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that old teenagers have their own thoughts and ideas. The fact that the thoughts of children are not perfect and logical does not mean their parents have right to eliminate their decision without considering the children's intentions. In the era of rapid social and technological changes leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, the good decision in parents' time would be out of data.
In the second place, the job of parents is not to make decision for their children, but to help them to choose. In this period of 15 to 18 year-old children, they are always radical. If their parents make decisions instead of themselves, they will not obey these decisions. Parents had better told their kids about their opinions, worries and experiences as friends. Give much more room for their kids to think and decide. Respect and believe their kids will choose the better one and will face the result directly.
In sum, considering the aforementioned reasons I support the statement that older teenagers had better make decisions by themselves. Admittedly, our parents are our best and most early teacher. They would give us more important advices to help us choose the best decision.
托福考试作文范文:
托福考试作文题目：
Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? Do you agree or disagree? ( 2016年3月13日)
高中生应该在上大学之前至少工作或者旅行一年，是否认同?
思路拓展：
【间隔年之利好】
① 兼职工作可以帮助年轻人积累工作经验，获得自我成就感，使他们对于社会有了更加深刻的洞察，为未来的择业打下坚实基础。
② 旅行可以开拓视野、丰富知识、结交新友，锻炼独立性，这些对于未来的发展是有利好的。
③ 工作和旅行提高了人的社会意识，丰富了人生的阅历，成熟了人的心态。
【间隔年之弊端】
① 很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回归校园，如果这样，间隔年就失去了它的初衷。
② 青春期是人的求知欲望最强，也是学习能力和 记忆力 最强的宝贵时期，高中生不应该耽误一年的时间远离校园而去打工或是闲逛，否则，学业就会被耽误。
③ 高中生没有形成核心竞争力，很难找到工作。即使是找到，也很容易被欺骗和剥削。
托福考试作文范文参考：高中生是否应该经历间隔年
【首段】背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场
Such is human nature to explore the unknown and see the outside word，that is why a great many high school graduates are keen on traveling or working for a period of time before attending dream universities. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is a wise idea to inspire high school leavers to experience the Grand Tour. As I see it, the merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits.
【二段】 间隔年之利好
The most important educational benefit of taking a year off before starting university life is that traveling exposes young adults to stunning places and exotic cultures. It is one thing for teenagers to read about distant countries, but it is even better to enrich the experience of the world on one’s own. What one learns by associating with strangers and absorbing diverse cultures is something he or she could never acquire in the classrooms. For example，I made many congenial friends by self-travel to Tibet after finishing my schooling. This fantastic journey not only expanded my mind but also alleviated my stress triggered by tight academic study. Feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit.
【三段】间隔年之利好
Virtually, youngsters can also become the beneficiaries of working as part-timers too. By that I mean, earning a living has a key role to play in helping one accumulate relevant working experience, train one’s crisis-solving abilities and deepen one’s insight into the society, which will lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder. To illustrate, via embarking on part-time jobs, I knew that money doesn’t grow on trees. Then, I studied even harder when coming back to campus.
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托福写作考什么|考试内容具体介绍
托福写作包括两部分，需在50分钟的时间内完成。
第一部分是综合写作，以阅读和听力材料为基础的写作试题，写作时间为20分钟。考生首先需要阅读一篇学术篇章，阅读的时间是3分钟。然后文章隐去，考生需要听一段大约为2分钟左右的与阅读主题相关的演讲。之后考生需要针对阅读和演讲中的观点 作文，总结 并说明演讲的内容与阅读中观点的关系，在20分钟的时间内完成一篇150~225字的文章。
第二部分是独立写作，需要考生根据自己的知识和 经验 陈述、解释并支持对待某一问题的某个看法，考查综合语言技能的作文题目的评分以回答的质量、完整性和准确性为依据。在30分钟内完成一篇300字以上的文章。
如何写好托福写作的并列句
最常见的并列句就是用and，but等作为连接词，将两个分句连接起来。比如：
历史必然含混也因此必然有趣。
History has to be vague and is therefore very interesting.
在中国孩子们没有权利也因此做一些自己不喜欢做的事情。
In China children have little rights and therefore have to do many things that they do not enjoy doing.
计算机不仅给人们带来了方便，还使人们学得更多。
Computers have not only brought convenience but they have also made people learn more.
从这些例句，我们可以得到以下这些结论：
1、尽量使用复数名词作主语
之所以提出这样的建议，是因为复数名词更能说明某个群体的共性，具有说服力，个体例子可能比较典型，不足以论证你的观点。
2、能用过去式就用过去式，能用完成式就用完成式
3、用not only把第一个谓语动词切开，用but also把第二个谓语动词切开
常见的三种 句子 切分结构：
主语和谓语切开(要求主语超过一个词)
Those parents, however, have supported such a stupid decision.
助动词和实义动词切开
Those parents have , however, supported such a stupid decision.
系动词和表语切开
It is, however, hardly true that……
4、不是省略而是替换(代词) 例：6. If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
A nice environment will make people happier.
A nice environment will also make people healthier. A good environment will not only make people happier and healthier, but it will even make people more productive.
通过这三句的比较，我们可以很明显地感受到并列句对于托福写作level提高的作用。
托福写作：如何构建严密的逻辑框架
熟读过一些典型托福 范文 的同学，应该了解，托福写作很讲究文章的逻辑严密性。有的人甚至觉得他的结构与八股文相比有过之而无不及，但是我建议大家不要轻视了这作文结构。建议大家考查自己是否有能力用 逻辑思维 方法 来表达自己对事物的想法和看法，实际上也就是流畅表达文章的结构上。大家在练习作文时，往往会觉得如何准确用词是练习的重点，会费去大量的时间。其实，如何构建一个严密的逻辑框架才是训练之重，需要被放在首位。
有了清晰的逻辑结构，就像全文有了骨架，剩下的工作就是怎样为他充实，这也就是在托福写作过程中语言的多样性。
这就要求大家一方面要继续看范文，除了初期做的学习语言和结构之外，还可以把自己写的文章和同一题目或相近题目的范文进行比较，体会不同的思路。另一方面，更要把指导性参考书多看看。
另外在托福考场上时间无疑是最为宝贵的，那么怎么能在有限的时间内争分夺秒，迅速阅读并理解题目，理清思路，并组织好语言呢?这需要我们在平时不断大量的练习，以及在每次练习后总结经验教训，以免下次再犯同样的错误。那么在平时的练习以及在考场上，审题无疑是最为重要的环节之一，因为它直接与我们的写作内容相联系，如果我们审题出现了偏差，那么不管我们的语言多么优美生动，不管我们的结构多么合理分明，我们的作文都是不合格的，所以我们在练习及考试时，都不能不重视审题那一步骤，务必要在最短的时间内抓住题目的关键词，正确理解要求，保证迅速而准确的解读出题目的隐含意义，并迅速梳理出自己的思路，树立自己的观点，写出高质的作文来。
大家知道新托福需要机考，所以在做模考的时候，要熟悉电脑的操作加快打字的速度，为自己赢取时间。
新东方托福写作语料库：孩子做作业时是否可以听歌上网
Students can use their mobile phones to surf on the Internet or listen to the music while doing their homework 在做作业的时候，孩子们可以使用手机或者是听音乐：
作家立场：反驳孩子们可以一边学习一边听歌或者使用手机。
【思路拓展】
1. 对于缺乏自律性的学生而言，一心二用容易分散他们的注意力，降低他们的学习效率。形成对比的是，学生们如果专注于学习，可以培养他们的学习兴趣，提高他们学习效率，使学生们精通学业。
2. 学业成功的关键是专注专心，做作业的同时听歌或者上网容易使孩子们变得懒散，散漫的习惯对于孩子们的学业，事业，生活都会造成不良影响。
让步学生做作业听歌和上网的利好：
1. 放松身心，缓解压力，尤其是在遇到学习困难的时候。
【薛鹏原创语料库】
1. The study will be delayed and disadvantaged.耽误学业
解析：disadvantage v使处于不利地位
2. get unsatisfying marks in the exam v考试成绩不能令人们满足
3. by contrast = in marked contrast v形成对比的是
4. Students need to be focused when fulfilling homework duty 学生在完成作业时应该专注的。
5. zero in on one’s academic study v专注于学习
解析：zero in on = focus on = concentrate on v专注于……
6. One’s attention will distracted 一个人的精力会被分散
7. impose much pressure upon our minds v增加了精神的压力
拓展：impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了国家的经济压力
8. …… is a great-waster v …… 是浪费时间的事情
9. …… waste large amounts of time v ……浪费大量的时间
10. fail to improve the efficiency of learning v不能提高学习效率
11. cannot enhance the efficiency of learning v不能提高学习效率
12. might become absent-minded 也许会变得心不在焉的
13. …… might interfere with one’s study …… 也许会耽误一个人的学习
解析：interfere with v干涉……
14. do the homework duty v做家庭作业
15. fulfill the homework duty v完成家庭作业
16. You can not eat your cake and have it two 鱼和熊掌不可兼得。
17. My personal story could justify my stand 我的个人的 故事 可以证明我的立场
点评：用于例证拓展的引导语，我的例子更加有说服力。
18. Some people argue that they might lose enthusiasm for their studies if they concentrate on study for a long time, therefore, they prefer to finish their homework duty while surfing on line or listen to some favorite music. 有些人认为他们如果专注于学习太久，也许会失去学习的热情，因此，他们更加喜欢一边上网或者听过，一边完成作业。
19. it is unwise to do sth v做……是不明智的
20. it is a hasty decision to encourage sb to do sth v鼓励某人做……是草率的决定
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