3月06号的托福考试已经结束,这一次的写作部分其实比上一次要简单一些,有的学生对于这次的考试题目是比较想要了解的,那么就到来了解2021年3月06日这一次托福的写作部分真题解析吧。
写作部分:
【综合写作】
讨论某种灵长类动物bag oba还是啥到底和chimpanzee哪个更aggressive
论点:bonobo比较温和,没有chimpanzee那么的aggressive
Reading
1:科学家们观察关进笼子中的两种猩猩,发现bonobo更加老实(less agressive) ;
2:bonobo族群里面存在社会法则(social law) 以保护bonobo幼崽,因此成年bonobo不会threaten
bonobo幼崽;
3:chimpanzee会hunt其他生物的肉吃,而bonobo不会。Bonobo是素食的,只吃nut和plants。
Listening
1:在实验室中的动物不会be have like they do in the wild.
2:bonobo族群里也有欺凌弱小的现象,而这个现象只发生在研究者不在的时候,即当researcher们都去观察chimpanzee的时候。
3:chimpanzee吃别的动物是因为human behavior影响到了他们的素食来源,迫使他们去猎杀别的动物。并且如果有一天当人类也影响到bonobo的habitat,bonobo也会猎杀别的动物。
【独立写作】
In order to succeed in school or work,the ability to adjustor adapt to changing condition or
circumstance is more important than excellent knowledge in a job or a field of study.
写作备考的方向:
1.范文仿写,勤奋多练
同学们备考写作时,可以先以满分范文为鉴本,比照写作,感受自己与满分范文之间的区别,并逐渐改变提升个人写作技能。备考期间需要勤奋多写机经和TPO题目,每天至少练习半小时,每次练习写作时需要集中精神、摒除浮躁才能做到有效。同学们可以在练习前关掉手机,电视,使用Write Room等写作软件,这种无干扰界面的全屏模式,让考生更专注写作练习上。同时,定好详细计划且每周必练一套TPO这种官方模拟题,体验在电脑屏幕上出现秒数倒数情况下打字写作的仿真考场感受。最后练完,可以将作文复制到word中检查纠正拼写错误。
2. 博览广采,勤于积累
建议考生阅读《ETS第四版托福官方指南》中的大量官方满分范文,和坚持阅读一些美国教育体制下的初高中及大学Reading List上的推荐名著或畅销英文读物,观而有选,取而有择。同时,在这些资源中收集有关托福独立写作常考话题(教育、科技、工作、个人生活等)的名人或个人例子,并且从中摘录一些丰富地道的短语和句型。“读书破万卷,下笔如有神”,如果没有语言的积累输入,怎么可能会有写作输出? 最后,提醒广大托福考生坚持每日练习写作、整体错题集,体会课上学的方法技巧,大道一定至简。
托福考试的作文很重要,学习别人的范文是进步的基础,出国人士似乎很多关心这个,和托福栏目一起来了解了解托福作文考试之挫折经历有什么价值,欢迎阅读。
托福考试作文题目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
托福考试作文参考分析:
举一些例子支持题目中的观点,确实有些痛苦经历对将来毫无帮助。
托福考试作文范文参考:
Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we will face numerous difficulties, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.
Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, "no pain no gain." For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties. And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problem solving skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.
In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.
有很多学生在准备托福的时候会先看看一些题目的预测,这样既可以大概的估计考试题目的方向,自己也好提前有准备,那么就到来看看2021年03月10日的托福写作考试的部分预测吧。
独立写作:
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It's a waste of money for Government to fund space travel or space exploration. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.
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Which kind of professors will you choose when selecting the courses?1,Some professors who are voted to be the most popular one?2,Some professors who are rewarded of outstanding research?
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is the best way for teachers to help students become more interested in a subject by explaining how this subject can help students live better outside of the school.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Government should provide free access to the internet; the individual should access to the internet without paying anything.
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Sometimes we are assigned to work in a group on a project. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The group will be helped more by person who will be willing to do what other group members want than by person who often strongly insists that things should be done in a way that is different from what the group wants to do.
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Which kind of professors will you choose when selecting the courses?1. Some professors who are voted to be the most popular one 2. Some professors who are rewarded of outstanding research
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more effective if teachers let students learn record lecture before class and discuss and practice during class.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to have rules about the types of clothes that people wear in their workplace and at school.
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Some people think it is the best approach for students to learn if school start the day at a early time in the morning. But someone think the school should start the day at late time. Which one do you prefer?
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Which one of the following is the best approach to reduce living expense?
A. share the rent with roommate B. do not buy the latest technology products like cellphone frequently C. cook food at home. 160311CN
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Students do reading by their own personality is as important as,or more important than reading assigned by teachers.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should buy the products made in their own country.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When working on a project,it’s better for classmates or colleagues to communicate face to face than sending emails.
托福写作的结构提升方式:
方法一、比较(contrast& comparison)
在托福大作文的写作中,考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较,相同关系叫对照(comparison),相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词:
In contrast,by contrast,on the contrary,while,whereas Likewise,similarly.
方法二、引用(quotation)
在托福大作文写作论证的过程中,表达一些观点的时候,如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力,说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致,形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累,由于备考时间紧迫,此类论证可以少用。此外,专家提醒考生要紧记,引用名人名言就意味着引用别人的观点,所以只要引两到三句起到论证自己观点的作用的话就可以了,点到为止,而不是中文写作中,引用越多越好。
方法三、让步(makingconcession)
让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念,其实在学状语从句时,我们就学过让步的关系,先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实,再转折给出自己的观点,否定前者。句型如下:
Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …
As is granted/ Admittedly,…
Opponents would argue that …
从上面的总结我们就可以看出来,托福大作文主体部分的写作方法是有很多种的,但是复杂一些的托福写作方法总是会更容易吸引考官的眼球而且也更容易达到写作的字数要求,所以建议大家都向最后一种表达方式靠拢。
托福独立作文题目:
Even though many people from different countries care about environment problems (pollution, global warming), the environmental situation can’t be improved in the future.
解析:
【题目翻译】
即使现在很多国家的很多人都非常关心类似于污染和全球变暖这样的环境问题,但是环境状况在将来还是不会得到改善的。你同意还是不同意这个观点?
【话题分析】
此题考查的是环境话题,其实,教育、环境、媒体、个人成功、工作等话题都是托福考试的重头戏,其中教育、个人成功和工作一直名列前茅,但是环境话题的再次出现,也是给各位考生提了个醒,要注意老话题的复习,包括素材和词汇的复习。
【历年相关考题】
大陆考题:
2008.6.22-The most important thing that the government can do in improving health care is to clean the environment.
2008年11月22日—Instead of spending money on the exploration of outer space, the government should spend money on the improvement of the environment.
北美考题:
2008.1.12-The government should focus more on environmental problems and less on economic development.
2008.3.14-The environmental issue is too complex to be solved by the individuals.
2008.4.26-The government should give priority to improving healthcare than to solving environmental problems.
【思路拓展】
如果同意上面的观点,那就是认为:即使现在很多国家关心环境问题,但问题还是得不到改善,可以有以下理由:
1. 很多国家只是关注(care about / pay more attention on …),或者可以理解成是意识到环境问题的严重性(realize the importance of environment problems),但是都不采取具体的行动(but they have not taken practical and effective measures),如此下去,环境问题也不会得到改善。比方说,由政府间气候变化专家委员会(Intergovernmental Panelon Climate Change)制定的京都议定书(Kyoto protocol),旨在减少二氧化碳排放量(reduce the emission of carbon dioxide),减轻全球变暖,都改了好几次了,但是全球变暖未见改善。
2. 很多国家,尤其是发展中国家和不发达国家,为了发展经济,大量的挖掘地球的资源(excavate all kinds of resource),排放废气废物(contamination),因此,他们是在以牺牲环境为代价来发展经济(develop a country’s economy at the cost of environment damage),如此以来,环境问题不仅不会改善,而且还会恶化(deteriorate)。
3. 很多污染单一国家或地区很难独立解决(it is too complicated for individual country to solve some environmental problems)。很多污染都是没有国界的(boundless),即使有的国家在关注,甚至采取行动,如果不把站在国际的角度上去解决这个问题 (tackle this problem at an international level),也是很难有成效的。
按照上面的具体分析,可以按照最简单的三点五段式来安排文章结构。